the building

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    the building

     another one is going up
    a skeleton of steel
    soon to be fat
    with concrete flesh
    taking away the night sky
    crowding the sun
    cutting away at the horizon
    as with broken serrated scissors
     

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    Teardrops commented on the building

    01-30-2011

    When the building number more than the trees its scares me .You said it all in this poem great write . A lot of talent here Marie
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    train64

    01/31/2011

    Thank you..This came to me years ago in school watching a building being built next to my dorm..taking away the horizon out my window..T64I

    Rhymer commented on the building

    01-29-2011

    Taking away the natures beauty. 10 from me............................
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    train64

    01/29/2011

    Thanks Rymer...i wrote that a long time ago watching a building going up..

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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