The Wish

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The Wish

Last night I looked up at the stars,
Just to see what I could see,
But as I looked and as I started,
It seemd they were staring back at me,
As if they were lying on the black dark ground,
Wishing they could shine like me,

I decided I should make a wish,
The same wish I made last night,

So I wish I will,
I wish I might,
Grown up and be a shining start like you tonight,

I waited a minute and then I felt,
The kiss of the wind upon my cheek,
All of the leaves flew up and danced in the air,
They circled and circled around me,
Until I could not see,

I looked up at the stars,
It was as if they winked ,
And then I heard a quiet wisper in the wind,
It said,
You were already a star in our eyes,
And you are yet to grow into a shining star too,
If you just believe,
It will come true,
Anything is possible when you beleive in you.

K.M Nyquist


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dahlusion commented on The Wish

08-11-2010

"I decided I should make a wish, The same wish I made last night, So I wish I will, I wish I might, Grown up and be a shining start like you tonight"—this makes the poem so deeply happy and complete. bravo!! Peace and Light, dah

NayInLove commented on The Wish

02-21-2009

you have a nice way with words!

NayInLove commented on The Wish

02-21-2009

you have a nice way with words!

bforibus commented on The Wish

02-21-2009

very beautiful. the visual and melody were sweet and calm. loved it

Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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