To Set You Free

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    To Set You Free

     To Set You Free

     

    My love is the hammer.

    My words are the chisel

    that will keep pounding

    at the walls you have built around you,

    till I can reach the feelings

    longing inside of you

    waiting to be set free.

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    danmartyjake1 commented on To Set You Free

    09-05-2009

    beautiful, short and oh so sweet. this is a darling..........
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    Poetster

    09/07/2009

    sometimes metaphors work thanks

    Singcanary commented on To Set You Free

    09-03-2009

    Love your thought pattern and wording. another good poem.
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    Poetster

    09/07/2009

    Thank you for taking the time to read some of my poems. This one has its own special meaning, from a time that was very hard.

    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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