Unfurling Silk

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    Unfurling Silk

    Unfurling  Silk

     

    Love, it’s everything, isn’t it?

    She was something I grabbed up

    and draped my dreams over—

    what a poet’s dreams are made of.

    Yet, my heart is scarred by wounds of time.

    I saw my dreams reflected in her eyes;

    large liquid eyes staring back,

    reflecting eternity.

    An old dream,

    an abandoned dream, pulled her to the known.

    Stranded in her heart,

    the quiet was a sea of empty space

    in a pulse pounding present,

    somewhere west of north,

    in the middle of nowhere.

    Sometimes I felt like the first joke told on earth,

    though emotion always drew her back.

    She veiled her hurt with gentle smiles

    casting her fate to the wind.

    The smile was born first.

    Laughs came easily

    expressing a thousand different sensations

    to those who met her.

    She walked away with the fluidity of unfurling silk.

    Like a whisper in a melody of silence,

    as graceful as the morning mist.

    Now, the silence palpitates with the sound of my heart.

    She will always remain the sum of my dreams.

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Unfurling Silk

    09-05-2009

    Poignant , beautiful, I felt her.... I understand so much with your expansive words and phrases. Thanks for sharing our talent.

    Poetster

    09/07/2009

    I strive so much to make my reader feel what I am trying to portray. I am thankful for your comment

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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