TREATMENT

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TREATMENT

Another life experience
to add to the collection
...Another defection of the soul
Yet still,
I see growth in the making
if I can take the right path
and escape the wrath of my own self hatred

There's something sacred
in a soul that's been broken
so may times
So fragile, that the spoken word
cannot touch the truth of the heart or mind
Yet others who are shattered sense what matters
and somehow reach into the darkest point
As we annoint each other
in the spirit of sharing
the repairing of the soul
It's a bond
the unshattered never know

And when the spark of hope flashes
You may see us dancing in the rain
As the slightest glimpse of a rainbow
Brings the courage to try to overcome the pain

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Solaris commented on TREATMENT

01-27-2012

I am one of those who is in the deep dark self destructive pain I understand and i feel your in this poem this is a good read

connsk8 commented on TREATMENT

06-10-2009

We may not know, but we can feel your pain and we can give you compassion, try us, your words almost put us there you are that good, not self hating, there is good in everyone, let us be the judge in that, thank you for sharing your pain, first step in releasing it...

caspiancri commented on TREATMENT

03-24-2009

meaningful

sk commented on TREATMENT

03-24-2009

Very good! Brought to mind AA for some reason...your words speak truth.

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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