Trials

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  • Lost Love

    Trials

    How can you not see what I can see,
    Every second that passed was of you and me,

    When you spoke those words I almost cried,
    "I Love You" with strength and pride,

    Years have passed in a moments time,
    Since I became yours and you became mine,

    We battled all forces and fears together,
    While proclaiming our love to last forever,

    Remember me? The one who caught your tears,
    When you had no strength to face your fears,

    Am I still your precious only one,
    Or do we part now and our love is done.

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    beadyeyes commented on Trials

    01-25-2009

    this is the best poem i read yet

    TilMyLastBreath commented on Trials

    01-18-2009

    WOW! this is a perfect poem dude, well put.

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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