Who Are You?

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    Who Are You?
    Who are you?
    This is me
    Not a program on your computer
    Not a piece of poetry...
    What have you done?
    What can you do?
    What makes you feel free?
    Are you here to pass the fear
    Of sitting home alone?
    Or is it just
    Your head might bust
    If your mind cant roam?
    Are you happy there
    At your desk chair
    Or, just nothing else to do?
    There's a world outside
    Don't come here to hide
    It's waiting there for you...
    If you need a friend
    To hold your hand
    And take away your blues
    Turn me off and go outside,
     They're waiting there for you...

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    FranzJ commented on Who Are You?

    10-21-2009

    Maybe if people would get out more_ to be friendly and nice to others no one would be blue - nice
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    laydbak1 commented on Who Are You?

    07-05-2009

    Get retrospective encounter with the real world Blues... We're all guilty sometimes.... Then again, these words are still friends... So, perhaps we defend, the right to this end... Kermit McHermit's R Us, eh...??? lol Good write..
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    JadedJezzabel commented on Who Are You?

    07-05-2009

    touche' i like your style bro....ever positive with enough edge to keep it real
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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