you, me

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  • Confusion

    you, me
    i love and i hate you
    i miss and i forget you
    you use and abuse me
    you cherish and forsake me
    i kiss and slap you
    i want and reject you
    you caress and release me
    you embrace and leave me
    so i ask
    what are we doing?

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    Paradice21 commented on you, me

    11-30-2009

    This Poem is Short, emotionial and nicely wrote!!
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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