remember me!

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    remember me!
    if i had a choice
    i'd never leave your side
    but life has other plans
    if i had a choice
    i'd love you all my life
    by the oceans keep us apart
    if i had a say
    i'd tell you my soul
    but the word refuse to come
    the best i can do
    is plead with you
    beg you to remember me!

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    kdarcy commented on remember me!

    04-21-2009

    to the point, do not beg for you are worthy of much more ... thanks for sharing
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    Emmad commented on remember me!

    12-17-2008

    "I'd tell you my soul" this sentence is enough for someone to remember you. This sentence is the heart of your poem.
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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