invisible

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    invisible

    i put on a brave face
    i walk up to you
    i look into your eyes
    but still me you don't see
    i smile at you
    hide the fact that I'm blue
    you face away
    and go back where you lay
    i want to scream at you
    "look at me, I'm right here"
    but i don't coz i know
    no difference will it make
    it's me you forsake
    but it's a big mistake
    for one day
    you'll appreciate
    but by then
    it'll be too late.

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    Paradice21 commented on invisible

    12-17-2008

    I like damage goods and expressions of love but so far this is my favorite. I will read some more of your work later.

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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    lies 0
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    holidays 1
    loneliness 2
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    life 0
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