i did it

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    i did it
    i looked into your eyes
    and smiled
    i knew i was lying
    and inside i cried.
    i kissed your lips
    and sighed
    i walked away
    and died.

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    Jasmarie commented on 2000

    06-03-2009

    this is so simple but it is so good....its a thousand words but you would have to read between the lines
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    riceryder commented on 2000

    11-18-2008

    P.S. nicely written though
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    riceryder commented on 2000

    11-18-2008

    seems to me (by your poem)your regretting your selfish intensions
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    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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