Your Love

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Your Love

Your love is like a rain storm
Landing on a dry and barren land.

Reviving life and giving hope
To a heart that has long been dead.

Your honesty is refreshing
Just like a morning rain.

Cleansing as it falls on me
Washing away the lies of my past.

Your passion is like a lightning storm
Blazing through the sky.

Sending electricity straight through me
Reaching places within me I've never found.

Your gentleness is like a light summer sprinkle
Soothing and healing me as it falls over me.

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kdarcy commented on Your Love

12-13-2010

That was a pleasant read, it had a nice flow, not to hard to feel, I liked it, be well k

spbsdude commented on Your Love

09-20-2010

As I read this I wonder if it is the love of man that is so healing, or the love of God. Mankind wounds, while God heals, so I go for the latter.

spbsdude commented on Your Love

04-06-2010

True love can be so healing. It can raise one's spirit and heal a weary life. Nice poem.

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Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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Sorrow 2
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Guiding Light 0
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