A little breeze

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    look to see but listen to learn

    A little breeze

    Welcome is the way to be when others look to see and gaze upon you
    Even if they can't see why or what makes you agreeable for awhile
    By yourself you calmly move along cooling others as you come and go
    But get together with some friends and watch them all scatter before you
    Change the way everthing looks and how they are looked upon by them
    And to think they feel they can control you is a joke even as it is spoke
    So let them think what they will and act as you feel when yu go roaring by
    When God created you I bet he knew what you could do and to who
    So blow and blow as much as you want until the time comes for you to blow or naught
    And hopefully some will remain to explain where you came and how you went to the end you devise not them 

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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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