The Only Way

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    Deciding how you feel is harder than it would seem, still your choice, though.

    The Only Way

     Not seen, still hurts but it is your choice.

    Give it away, who's to  say but it is still your choice.

    Your world, their words, all the same, still your choice.

    Pick as you will, just remember that it is still your choice.

    A feeling cannot be touched yet can touch, still your choice.

    Inside of you, as you must know is a choice and it is still yours.

    Happy or sad, timid or mad, you can say it is still your choice.

    Don't give it away, whatever they say, because if you do it is still your choice used by others.

    Choose to be happy, choose to be glad, memories are still yours to be had.

    Since memories are all you have to fill your life, remember it was always your choice.

    The greatest gift was when your feelings were placed inside where no one but you can make them what you need as your choice.

    Make your life a happy one, Remember, it will always be your choice.

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    GyralAdmiral commented on The Only Way

    11-14-2013

    Good job, combatrider. Nice figuratives. I particular enjoy the rhymes and the emphasis. Line 7, my best.
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    combatrider commented on The Only Way

    11-13-2013

    There can be no doubt. Only an individual can ultimately choose how feel in response to the outside.
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    combatrider commented on The Only Way

    03-12-2013

    You must enter a poem comment before you can rate this poem. All poem comments must be a minimum of 50 characters (not words). A unique ability that every person has with complete control should not give away such a gift.
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