afterwards

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Erotic

    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this first day back @ work thinking[daydreaming?] about where I wasn't!

    afterwards

    The best moments,
    warm and wet.
    your skin aglow,
    beaded with sweat.
    goosebumps rising under my breath.
    the tip of my tongue,
    a quiver,
    a shiver,
    a drawn out sigh.
    no other reality,
    just you and I.



         

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    lunamarie commented on afterwards

    09-02-2009

    hmm ...... now I am daydreaming ............. Luna

    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

    Unknown Source

    peejay55’s Poems (8)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    THANK YOU 0
    the legacy 0
    stand up 0
    a land fit for heroes 2
    my first real kiss 1
    time 2
    huh!! 1
    afterwards 1