my first real kiss

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unfortunately, she was 16 and as soon as she found out how young i was she took off like a scalded cat and the next time isaw her was6 yrs later in the us nco club at templehof in Berlin with her guy. she smiled when he wasn't lookin but never spoke and i haven't seen her since!

my first real kiss

thirteen but looking older,
scared shitless but acting bolder
I thought she didn't like me
now her tongue is touching mine
thrilling, hardening, emboldening me.

this is to make up for
a very mean left hook
 a comment that wasn't meant for
the offence that she took

and so she kissed me better
 and set me onthat road
that leads to where i am now
made me feel i was goin to explode
stars n lights n wow!

many kisses later, a mere kiss is no big deal
but i still remember that first one
and how it made me feel so real

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lunamarie commented on my first real kiss

09-04-2009

I love the second line ... this is cute and funny to me ... Luna

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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