All ALone

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  • Lost Love
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  • Loss
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  • Emotional
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  • Life

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    Feelings are very important to everyone! I feel different things each day. I love to write poems and well everyone gives me different thoughts to think about when I write!

    All ALone
    The pain within can kill slowly.
    The feeling to be left out.
    To see everyone with joy in their eyes and their faces.
    Smiles everywhere.
    But you, just all alone.
     
    For everyone to see you and just smile.
    You think no one is there  to help you out.
    Does anyone care. Am I even here?
    Thoughts of love comes in and out of your mind.
    Tears fill your eyes while your all alone.
     
    So is this the true you.
    Or can there be a way to make your life better?
    YES, love is on the way.
    Dont cry nomore.
    Laugh, give a beatiful smile to the passers by.
    Let everyone no that you will not be all alone.
     
    To be alone can really hurt.
    It can be heart breaking ,but just a smile to a sad, hurt alone person can give them a piece of feeling ;called love.
    Let it show trhat you are not all alone!

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    lonewolf commented on All ALone

    08-26-2010

    i am truly enjoying your work. i like how you think, and i love your never give up attitude. blessings to you!
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    Kaiprin commented on All ALone

    12-23-2009

    I like your contrast between loneliness and the exterior individuals who are connected with a network of friends. I also enjoyed the triumphant spirit at the end of the work. Staying positive is a great thing.
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    liltrulz92

    12/23/2009

    well staying positive is a great thing but it is sometimes hard to keep going.. thank you so much for your comments they mean a lot to me :)

    Poetry comes nearer to vital truth than history.

    Plato (BC 427-BC 347) Greek philosopher.

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