Promise

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    Poem Commentary

    THERES A  SONG BY TIFFANY EVANS FT. CIARA CALLED  PROMISE RING, AND THAT IS MY INSPRATION FOR MY POEM. I LOVE THAT SONG IT HAS MY NAME IN IT. WELL I HOPE YOU ALL LIKE MY POEM.
     
    I HAVENT BEEN ON HERE IN A WHILE DUE TO PROBLEMS BUT I PROMISE YOU ALL THAT IM BAK AND HERE TO WRITE
     
     
    *TIFFANY*
     
    MY NAME IS TIFFANY AND YALL KNOW ME      

    Promise
    HE LOOKED AT ME WITH THE LOOK I ALWAYS GET.
    THE LOOK OF LOVE,
    HE WALKED AWAY WITHOUT A WORD.
    DIDN'T LOOK BACK.
    HE'S GONE.
    SITTING HERE ALONE, THINKING TO MYSELF;
    WHERE DID I GO WRONG? WHAT HAPPEN TO OUR LOVE?
    HE PROMISED ME:
    HE WOULD NEVER LEAVE ME,
    NEVER WILL HE MAKE ME CRY
    PROMISED NOT TO HURT ME
    PROMISED ME NOT TO LIE
    PROMISE ME TODAY
    PROMISED ME FOREVER
     
    DID ALL THOSE PROMISES MEAN NOTHING?
    ALL A LIE?
    HE BROKE ALL OF THOSE
    I SAY YA BREAK THE PROMISES WERE BREAKIN UP, BUT IT IS YOU I WANT
    I COULD BE YOUR YOUNG THANG,
    HE COULD BE MY PAPI
    DON'T BREAK THE PROMISE
     
    PROMISE ME YOU LOVE ME
    PROMISE ME ALWAYS
    PROMISE ME TOGETHER WE WILL STAY
    JUST PROMISE ME
    JUST PROMISE ME YOUR PROMISE IS TRUE
     
    PROMISE IS A PROMISE
     
    I PROMISE YOU I LOVE YOU
     
    KEEP YOUR PROMISE TO ME

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    lonewolf commented on Promise

    08-26-2010

    promises made in haste are empty words. promises made over a lifetime of knowing someone, will always withstand the test of time.
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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