One Lost Friend

1 Comments

Poem Commentary

R.I.P. MARCUS I LOVE YOU SO MUCH

LET WHOEVER SHOT HIM KNOW THAT THEY WILL NOT LIVE THIS DOWN AS LONG AS IM ALIVE.

WHY WOULD YOU TAKE HIM AWAY HE WAS SWEET AND CARING AND HE WAS YOUNG AS WELL WHAT DID HE DO?

MARCUS I WONT FORGET YOUR SMILE.

MY LOVE GOES TO HIS FAMILY.

AND I GREIVE AS WELL TO HIS DEATH.

 

I lost another friend and I cant take losses any more I am in tears and his death will not be forgotten.

AND THIS WAS A MURDER!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 

*TIFFANY*

One Lost Friend

Please don't go.

He is gone.

I can't believe he is actually dead.

"No way.

Your lying..

Where is he?

Come on jokes over."

Tears fall from my eyes.

Heart pounding and my words are lost.

"Come on stop joking where is he at?"

"He is in heaven now.

He was shot yesterday at a shoot out.

He died instantly."

" No No NOOOOOO it can't be I just saw him yesterday."

So now I write :

It's GOT TO be your smile,

It'IS GOT TO be your touch

No one hated your soul

Now I look for you.

I have one lost friend

So tell me where your at

I love you

I miss you

Come back

Don't leave me

I don't WANT TO not see you

I cant stand you not being here

I love you you cant die on me.

My heart now full with grieve

I LOVE YOU

I will NOT forget you never will

Your soul will live on forever.

I promise you

I will find who killed you and personally kill them myself if I have to.

I need you my friend.

PLEASE GOD GIVE ME BACK MY BEST FRIEND.

I cant live without him.

ONE LOST FRIEND thats all it takes for me.

So can I please have my friend back.

I DON'T want a lost dead friend.

Iwant him back because I love him

I miss him SO MUCH

I wont forget you I SWEAR TO YOU!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MARCUS R.I.P.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Poem Comments

(1)

Please login or register

You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

Login or Register

Kaiprin commented on One Lost Friend

12-23-2009

You must have lost someone very close to you, but the memories of the good times can help to dissipate the bad times.

liltrulz92

12/24/2009

I have lost more than just a friend and it hurts but the memories of the good times keep me going

Poetry is not the expression of personality but an escape from personality.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

liltrulz92’s Poems (16)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Remember..I will remember... Please you remember.. R.I.P 3
Angel whispers. 1
The Last Star 1
?PaIn? 4
With you 1
TEARS 0
MY ANGEL TO RETURN! someday! 0
What its worth 1
Promise 1
For What He Said 0
Calling for Help 0
Im From 0
One Lost Friend 1
All ALone 2
I pray; IM DYING 0
Pain Poem 3