I pray; IM DYING


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Everyone now and then has been betrayed by someone, its sad but true and opnce you've been let down you feel as if you should be dead. This poem states the truth. I hope you enjoy my writtings!
                       much love

I pray; IM DYING

 Eyes swollen
Heart at ache
Stomach drops
Mouth open
In shock,
I cry
Tears flow down
I drop to the ground
Pray for this to be over
Pray for my life
Pray for me to die
Pray for it to end
I pray for you to come
Like a bullet piercing my heart
My throat dry
Try to scream yet mute
No sound at all just visions
Hurry up Im cold
Im laying on the floor
Blood spills
Ive been shot
Shot by lies and betrayal
Baby I gave you my all
I gave you my heart
You took it for granted and
Killed me
As I lay there I pray
Pray for you to return
Pray for my family
Pray for my friends
Pray for my love
Pray for you
My world was all you
My dreams just you
My life you
Everything revolved around you
Im cold and shaken
My life flashes before my eyes
You did this
I cry now but you dont see
Your not even here
Do you care?
Im praying for God to forgive you
Pray for that love
Pray for the pain to go
Pray to dissapear
Pray for the end of it all
Pray for you to call
Baby I pray for you
You killed me yet Im still here
Dead but with you
My soul forever more
Im the angel watching you
Everyday I pray for you
Baby I love you
 ..._...|..____________________, ,
 ....../ `---___________----_____|] = = = = = D
 .....), ---.(_(__) /
 ....// (..) ), ----"

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Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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