Angels Cry

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Dusted off for for Marie. Loch Garton is near Inverness Scotland. A must visit place

Angels Cry

 

I walk on nature’s carpet past pine trees; noble and tall

Straining my gaze to put name to melodious song bird

A swish of a branch; I turn to see a disappearing tail

Grass bubbles up from mother earth adding another dimension

In reverential ore I turn; catching sight of lichen on a tree

Rainbow colours; like coral from a tropical Northern Australian sea

Born by pine scent; I gaze upon mirrored water from Loch shore

Clouds moulded by sculptor’s knife, add tone to the waters skin

Long grass with the elegance of a ballerina; lacy arms pose

Her feathering costume spins on the spot; all framing a masterpiece

I sit on a log baring its wooden sole; at piece at one with nature

 

fingernails screech upon blackboard sending shivers down Garton’s spine

An Osprey’s call sends jagged sound-waves streaking across agree sky

Strikes me; no mercy; mobile phone’s ring forced back; sends it to shore

 

Angles cry upon Loch canvas mourning the intrusion upon tranquillity

Their droplets strike harps, play a sad tune; ballerinas dance

Nobody is aloud to see that which nature had proffered for me

A sadness creeps towards me; slowly; regretfully I turn to leave

Loch spirits see the regret in me; a sudden breeze ripples water

Waters mirrored surface returned; pine trees wave forgiveness

I am at peace; once again; free from expectation; time for me

©Phil Golding 05/06

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ESSENCEOFLOVE commented on Angels Cry

10-12-2010

I can feel the love for this place in your words. Beautiful descriptions and expressions. I love the way you formatted..............E

Po8ree

10/13/2010

Thank you for kind words. If ever get to visit Scotland you must visit Loch Garton, one of Earths beautiful places.. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem.

REGINA2 commented on Angels Cry

10-11-2010

This poem is really deep. I had to read it twice. Beautiful job.

Po8ree

10/13/2010

Thank you for kind words. If ever get to visit Scotland you must visit Loch Garton, one of Earths beautiful places.. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem.

Teardrops commented on Angels Cry

10-07-2010

This is beyond beautiful its seeing a waterfall for the first time or a rainbow that touches the tip of a stream . You made the nature spirit in me very happy thank you for reminding me why i loved Europe so Marie

Po8ree

10/13/2010

Thank you for kind words. If ever get to visit Scotland you must visit Loch Garton, one of Earths beautiful places.. I am pleased you enjoyed the poem.

Chaos128 commented on Angels Cry

10-07-2010

Peerless descriptions, Po8ree, done with the appreciative attention of a naturalist. Illustrating the osprey's discordant scream with the font was an inspired idea.

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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