Anticipation

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Anticipation

I light up thinking of what can be
You, me
A young love waiting for a chance
Will it be?
I dear to think most definitely

Hope for a future of true romance
Opportunity, eternity
A life together i dream secretly
Well let's see
Am I for you and are you for me?

Should we run the risk seriously?
Trust, sincerity
Take the leap, a true alliance
Marriage, family
How I wish this to be our destiny

Hold my tongue, wait with patience
Slowly, surely
Our race to happiness, finish finally
Truely, deeply
To love you totally and completely.

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FreeBird02 commented on Anticipation

04-02-2010

Strong metaphors which are sending a clear message to your other heart, you feel beating so sincere. I will review more of your work you have a pleasant style. FreeBird 02

geeshie1

04/03/2010

thanks a lot and i look forward to your reviews :-) it will be greatly appreciated.

Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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