Freedom

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    Freedom

    Breathe deeply the fresh air
    Relieving all tension and strain
    Releasing the poison from inside
    Smell freedom

    Hear profoundly the slamming of the door
    Forgetting all that lurks behind
    Leaving the past where it belongs
    Hear freedom

    Feel desperately the utter joy
    Replacing all sorrow and despair
    Awakening a sense of peace within
    Feel freedom

    Taste sweetly life's bountiful offerings
    Swallowing every bit of experience
    Becoming carefree and resilient
    Taste freedom

    See clearly the future that lies beyond
    Engendering hope of what could be
    Turning dreams into real life
    See freedom.

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    FreeBird02 commented on Freedom

    04-06-2010

    Very nice and strategically placed metaphors with a perfect crescendo from smell freedom to hear freedom to feel freedom to at last... See Freedom! FreeBird 02
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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