At His Gaze

5 Comments

Tags:
  • Nature

    At His Gaze

     The stars shines at night and
    the moon is arrayed in beauty.
    The sun gives energy and light
    and the fields become plentiful and fruity.
    The wind blows the pollen and
    make waves over the seas.
    The breeze is soft and smooth
    and strokes gently against the trees.
    The clouds hovers above, between the night and day,
    like little sheep moving slowly down the path in twilights way.
    The acts of God never ceases to have me amazed.
    I cherish every moment I have to know Him, and every moment that I have at His gaze.

    Poem Comments

    (5)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    ansari commented on At His Gaze

    06-20-2010

    I love your poem , I too am amazed at the wonders of nature. My poem " oh every breath of fresh air ...' hope you'll add your comments to it. thank you.
    Reply to Comment

    MagicRock commented on At His Gaze

    11-28-2009

    Man this was wonerful. All I can say is "Glory to God!" Keep writing. This is you at your best. Just watch out for the grammatical errors, UNLESS they were intentional. Be Bless Bro.
    Reply to Comment

    Iamadreamr commented on At His Gaze

    11-15-2009

    i REALLY LIKE THIS ONE TRY NOT TO ADD AND SO MUCH i THINK YOU WILL LIKE THE FLO BETTER.
    Reply to Comment

    JaLaw

    11/23/2009

    thanks for the tip; makes a lot of sense

    FloeticJustice commented on At His Gaze

    07-20-2009

    Wooww.....This is just beautiful, it's really smooth and automatically has you smiling. Thank God for your gift.
    Reply to Comment

    SpiritSong commented on At His Gaze

    07-12-2009

    Wow,,Thank you JLaw...I absolutely love this part.... The breeze is soft and smooth, and strokes gently against the trees. The clouds hovers above, between the night and day, like little sheep moving slowly down the path in twilight's way. The acts of God never ceases to have me amazed. I cherish every moment I have to know Him, and every moment that I have at His gaze. Very..Very lovely. Wonderful articulation of words, expression, and imagery. Thanks JLaw..Beautiful!
    Reply to Comment

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

    JaLaw’s Poems (20)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Anger- be careful 4 06/03/2009
    At His Gaze 5 05/28/2009
    I am waiting. 1 05/28/2009
    From the Height of God 3 05/28/2009
    Grieved in the spirit 7 01/23/2009
    Down by the seashore 5 01/08/2009
    Refuse to change 8 01/08/2009
    don't you quit 12 01/08/2009
    Acts of love 18 01/08/2009
    Bitterness of truth 4 01/08/2009
    Life's meaning 0 01/08/2009
    Jesus is 2 01/08/2009
    Come to reality 2 12/31/2008
    As a young man 3 12/31/2008
    Women of my heart 2 12/31/2008
    moments long 3 12/26/2008
    Daily bread 2 12/12/2008
    Pleasure 3 12/12/2008
    Let it go! 4 12/12/2008
    Face of Shame 5 12/12/2008
    Top of Page