At His Gaze

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    At His Gaze

    The stars shines at night and
    the moon is arrayed in beauty.
    The sun gives energy and light
    and the fields become plentiful and fruity.
    The wind blows the pollen and
    make waves over the seas.
    The breeze is soft and smooth
    and strokes gently against the trees.
    The clouds hovers above, between the night and day,
    like little sheep moving slowly down the path in twilights way.
    The acts of God never ceases to have me amazed.
    I cherish every moment I have to know Him, and every moment that I have at His gaze.

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    ansari commented on At His Gaze

    06-20-2010

    I love your poem , I too am amazed at the wonders of nature. My poem " oh every breath of fresh air ...' hope you'll add your comments to it. thank you.

    MagicRock commented on At His Gaze

    11-28-2009

    Man this was wonerful. All I can say is "Glory to God!" Keep writing. This is you at your best. Just watch out for the grammatical errors, UNLESS they were intentional. Be Bless Bro.

    Iamadreamr commented on At His Gaze

    11-15-2009

    i REALLY LIKE THIS ONE TRY NOT TO ADD AND SO MUCH i THINK YOU WILL LIKE THE FLO BETTER.

    JaLaw

    11/23/2009

    thanks for the tip; makes a lot of sense

    FloeticJustice commented on At His Gaze

    07-20-2009

    Wooww.....This is just beautiful, it's really smooth and automatically has you smiling. Thank God for your gift.

    SpiritSong commented on At His Gaze

    07-12-2009

    Wow,,Thank you JLaw...I absolutely love this part.... The breeze is soft and smooth, and strokes gently against the trees. The clouds hovers above, between the night and day, like little sheep moving slowly down the path in twilight's way. The acts of God never ceases to have me amazed. I cherish every moment I have to know Him, and every moment that I have at His gaze. Very..Very lovely. Wonderful articulation of words, expression, and imagery. Thanks JLaw..Beautiful!

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