Down by the seashore

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    Down by the seashore
    Time after time I find I am slipping and fall...ing,
    call...ing on my angels to lift this burden I'm haul..ing,
    I'm paus...ing for a moment, what's caus...ing all this drama,
    I'm ...lost... and no one's coming,
    I've cross...ed over in some...thing
    bizarre to humanity, Doc meds are now vanity,
    peace far more than fantasy, enhance the glance,
    come and see the peace,.... come near and feel the breeze
    retreat, be freed, relieved, at eased, clean air to breath,
    I,...I love this chemistry, I...I love this ministry of... nature's ability to ...replenish energy, the ....key to find inner peace, re...pent, learn of Calvary, re...ceive the spirit sincerely and change your des-ti-ny ....modern times, modern crimes keep stress...ing me... how can the blind lead the blind, when they won't be...lieve? They are
    Thriving weeds, and withering trees. The truth is misperceived, I'm bereaved, so I'll be down by the sea shore.

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    jadienblu commented on Down by the seashore

    03-09-2009

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    jadienblu commented on Down by the seashore

    03-09-2009

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    Niecy commented on Down by the seashore

    02-28-2009

    Well-formed flow my brotha, you already know that narrow is the way that leadeth unto life, and few there be that find it. Haa, hah...Stay on the grind, your teaching!, and there is peace by the riverside. Shalom, Namaste!
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    writerspassion commented on Down by the seashore

    01-23-2009

    Loved how you did this one. perfect
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    tlc73162 commented on Down by the seashore

    01-14-2009

    Beautiful and true. Keep the faith and keep writing. God has blessed you with a true gift. God Bless You!
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    The true philosopher and the true poet are one, and a beauty, which is truth, and a truth, which is beauty, is the aim of both.

    Ralph Waldo Emerson, American Poet (1803-1882)

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