Down by the seashore


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    Down by the seashore

    Time after time I find I am slipping and, on my angels to lift this burden I'm,
    I'm for a moment, what's all this drama,
    I'm ...lost... and no one's coming,
    I've cross...ed over in some...thing
    bizarre to humanity, Doc meds are now vanity,
    peace far more than fantasy, enhance the glance,
    come and see the peace,.... come near and feel the breeze
    retreat, be freed, relieved, at eased, clean air to breath,
    I,...I love this chemistry, I...I love this ministry of... nature's ability to ...replenish energy, the ....key to find inner peace, re...pent, learn of Calvary, re...ceive the spirit sincerely and change your des-ti-ny ....modern times, modern crimes keep me... how can the blind lead the blind, when they won't be...lieve? They are
    Thriving weeds, and withering trees. The truth is misperceived, I'm bereaved, so I'll be down by the sea shore.

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    Niecy commented on Down by the seashore


    Well-formed flow my brotha, you already know that narrow is the way that leadeth unto life, and few there be that find it. Haa, hah...Stay on the grind, your teaching!, and there is peace by the riverside. Shalom, Namaste!

    writerspassion commented on Down by the seashore


    Loved how you did this one. perfect

    tlc73162 commented on Down by the seashore


    Beautiful and true. Keep the faith and keep writing. God has blessed you with a true gift. God Bless You!

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

    JaLaw’s Poems (20)

    Title Comments
    Title Comments
    Anger- be careful 4
    At His Gaze 5
    I am waiting. 1
    From the Height of God 3
    Grieved in the spirit 7
    Down by the seashore 5
    Refuse to change 8
    don't you quit 12
    Acts of love 18
    Bitterness of truth 4
    Life's meaning 0
    Jesus is 2
    Come to reality 2
    As a young man 3
    Women of my heart 2
    moments long 3
    Daily bread 2
    Pleasure 3
    Let it go! 4
    Face of Shame 5