Let it go!

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Let it go!

The strife,
the lust,
the hate,
the grudge,

all such has got to go,
we got to let it go.

uncleanness and fear,
unmarried sex and beer,

all of this has got to go,
we got to let it go.

unrighteousness and greed,
cruel and evil deeds,

all such has got to go,
we got to let it go.

reluctant to forgive,
the love of dollar bills

all of this has got to go,
so that we all may grow.

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Lolee commented on Let it go!

10-01-2009

People just love to hang on to all that baggage. But, they've got to let it go! Great write...as they say.

litldeer commented on Let it go!

08-03-2009

Very real and true talent. I could read your poems all day. You are a great writer. Please keep writing and I will keep reading. Another 10.

FloeticJustice commented on Let it go!

07-20-2009

Real and Very very true......I like the layout aswell, it's a straight to the point kind of poem. Great work.

drewking commented on Let it go!

12-18-2008

good poem, like what it says..

Poetry is what is lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

JaLaw’s Poems (20)

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At His Gaze 5
I am waiting. 1
From the Height of God 3
Grieved in the spirit 7
Down by the seashore 5
Refuse to change 8
don't you quit 12
Acts of love 18
Bitterness of truth 4
Life's meaning 0
Jesus is 2
Come to reality 2
As a young man 3
Women of my heart 2
moments long 3
Daily bread 2
Pleasure 3
Let it go! 4
Face of Shame 5