Let it go!

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    Let it go!
    The strife,
    the lust,
    the hate,
    the grudge,

    all such has got to go,
    we got to let it go.

    uncleanness and fear,
    unmarried sex and beer,

    all of this has got to go,
    we got to let it go.

    unrighteousness and greed,
    cruel and evil deeds,

    all such has got to go,
    we got to let it go.

    reluctant to forgive,
    the love of dollar bills

    all of this has got to go,
    so that we all may grow.

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    Lolee commented on Let it go!

    10-01-2009

    People just love to hang on to all that baggage. But, they've got to let it go! Great write...as they say.
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    litldeer commented on Let it go!

    08-03-2009

    Very real and true talent. I could read your poems all day. You are a great writer. Please keep writing and I will keep reading. Another 10.
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    FloeticJustice commented on Let it go!

    07-20-2009

    Real and Very very true......I like the layout aswell, it's a straight to the point kind of poem. Great work.
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    drewking commented on Let it go!

    12-18-2008

    good poem, like what it says..
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    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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