Pleasure

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Pleasure

Pleasure is sweet.
pleasure is fine,
but sometimes costs more than quarters and dimes.

Pleasure is joy.
pleasure is pain,
if you're willing to suffer, the pleasure in gain.

Pleasure is quality.
pleasure is free,
but, careful, pleasure can place death's hook in your teeth.

Pleasure for you
is not pleasure for me.
What's dust before my eyes may be your fantasy.

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Lolee commented on Pleasure

10-01-2009

The bible says: "Every man is tempted when he is drawn away of his own lusts and enticed. And when lust is conceived, it bringeth forth sin, and sis when it is finished bringeth forth death. Good job, J.

ShawnaD commented on Pleasure

03-12-2009

i love this :) it sounds so good and then i read the last stanza and im like WOW (lol) it shocked me and sounds like a dis but maybe thats why i love it GOOD JOB

litldeer commented on Pleasure

12-27-2008

I like the way this flows. Very good.

A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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