Face of Shame

5 Comments

Tags:
  • Emotional

    Face of Shame
    The feeling of loneliness,
    the feeling of despair,
    the feeling of helplessness,
    the feeling: who cares?

    The feeling of struggles,
    the feeling of a fight,
    the feeling of stubbornness,
    the feeling of night,

    the feeling of discouragement,
    the feeling of waste,
    the feeling of lost,
    the feeling of wanting to be embraced,

    the feeling of hurt,
    the feeling of pain,
    the feeling of tears
    falling from the face of shame.

    Poem Comments

    (5)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    christiangirl commented on Face of Shame

    09-19-2009

    love this! wonderful job!! thanks for sharing these splendid words.
    Reply to Comment

    litldeer commented on Face of Shame

    08-03-2009

    Hmmm - this was really good. I like the way you rhyme. The flow is perfect. You share your deepest emotions and make them shine through to the reader. Great job. Write on!
    Reply to Comment

    LISTENTOURHEART commented on Face of Shame

    06-03-2009

    u did a terrific job with this poem sweetie it expresses emotions n all u did a very gd job..continue the good work
    Reply to Comment

    jickyjack commented on Face of Shame

    03-02-2009

    This really touches deep human emotions. You have done a nice job with this.
    Reply to Comment

    houseofbirdsong commented on Face of Shame

    12-12-2008

    Very nicely done....!
    Reply to Comment

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

    JaLaw’s Poems (20)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    Anger- be careful 4 06/03/2009
    At His Gaze 5 05/28/2009
    I am waiting. 1 05/28/2009
    From the Height of God 3 05/28/2009
    Grieved in the spirit 7 01/23/2009
    Down by the seashore 5 01/08/2009
    Refuse to change 8 01/08/2009
    don't you quit 12 01/08/2009
    Acts of love 18 01/08/2009
    Bitterness of truth 4 01/08/2009
    Life's meaning 0 01/08/2009
    Jesus is 2 01/08/2009
    Come to reality 2 12/31/2008
    As a young man 3 12/31/2008
    Women of my heart 2 12/31/2008
    moments long 3 12/26/2008
    Daily bread 2 12/12/2008
    Pleasure 3 12/12/2008
    Let it go! 4 12/12/2008
    Face of Shame 5 12/12/2008
    Top of Page