moments long

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    moments long

    The moon shines upon your face
    and my soul awakes within,
    as we gaze, together, at the stars above
    the romantic night begins,

    Your beauty is unveiled,
    your love for me is unleashed,
    my love for you is revealed, and
    the passion, together, we reap,

    The breeze brushes your hair
    with gentle delicate strokes,
    you need not say you love me,
    the look in your eyes has already spoke,

    The heavenly bodies predestined this night
    for you and I to be,
    close your eyes, the sweetest kiss
    sparks the night's melodies,

    The softest touch of your hands and the strength of your embrace,
    brings us together, in unity, and locks our bodies in its rightful place,

    The cool of the night is no longer cool, but the breezes of the night are still blowing strong,
    relieving the body's entrapped heat, allowing us oneness moments long.

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    SpiritSong commented on moments long

    07-12-2009

    This is the most romantic, sensual, revealing of true, pure and God ordained Husband and wife intimacy I have possibly ever read...a giant 10 score on this as well my friend...tender...touching...full...rich...and Free within the boundaries of Abba father Favor and unlimited Blessings that pour freely on the lives of His obedient and highly treasured people. those who love His commands in word and accompanied deeds of loving kindness and Gracious set apart living onto Him alone as our 1st and foremost treasured Love....than as a waterfall overflows upon all below...so does His genuine love limitless flow...upon all who are blessed to stand beneath it. Enduring, Timeless, Love..that comes through every battle and whirlwind life can throw at it. .Eternal and Complete. Beautiful beyond description.... Thank You...JLaw...Thank You

    Niecy commented on moments long

    02-28-2009

    Ooh And I can't release cherishing this moments Long! I love how when one paints a picture with words I can invision myself rapped all up in it. You speak Love of divine grace! Excellent place!

    litldeer commented on moments long

    12-27-2008

    This is beauiful. Really great

    Poetry is not an expression of the party line. It's that time of night, lying in bed, thinking what you really think, making the private world public, that's what the poet does.

    Allen Ginsberg (1926-1997) U.S. poet.

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