Blunders To Wonders

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this poem is about finding your path in life and attempting to stick to it

Blunders To Wonders

Blunders To Wonders

 

Wonders to blunders

Pacify my sights.

Electrify my nights,

Leaving bitter stale

Air to breathe.

I’ve tried my best

Now I have to believe.

I’m a senior tech

More like an example

Of a Typical wreck,

That sets off bombs

In an arsenal

Of emotional waterfalls;

In senseless installs

Smothered by instability.

 

Catch the phase

I’ve been stuck in this funk

For too many days.

In far too many ways;

Learning life lessons

Resurrected through the haze.

I’m at the end of the road,

And I hate to say it

But I told you so.

Got to try and remember

The random blabber.

Retain what matters.

What we don’t know

Could be a critical map,

Of an infamous gap.

Even though

It was presented

Thru masterful movements,

In simple similarities,

Disguised and unrecognized

Like the hunter’s trap.

 

aGirlNamedK

2/7/2013

 

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poett commented on Blunders To Wonders

02-07-2013

Great write I really like it cause have gone through that phase. Hugs

Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

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