Always a Room With a 1

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Always a Room With a 1

I haven’t seen you in a while
it’s been eleven long years since,
and tonight, for the first time
in a long time,
being with you feels like home.
Estranged;
but never the less a homeland.

We always tend to
end up in a hotel room
with a 1 on them.
always playing on the TV
something with Kurt Cobain,
and being with you again,
feels like home all over.
Sixteen years later,
No means for an end.

I think we understand
each other so well;
almost like we are one in the same.
I think that’s why
we both know undoubtably,
we could never be together;
like we once where
together again.

I will always love you
as you have a piece of my heart.
I know for certainty,
we will meet again in the future;
to travel to the past
in a room with a one
on it again.

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dahlusion commented on Always a Room With a 1

06-29-2010

"I will always love you as you have a piece of my heart. I know for certainty, we will meet again in the future; to travel to the past in a room with a one on it again. "—i love the feeling of this closure. bravo!

redbloodink commented on Always a Room With a 1

06-26-2010

this write is a # 1 I know this feeling I know this meaning... meeting another soul and knowing another soul....... But it's just not the 1 you were ment to be with in this life.... great write..... red

pdxgrrll

06/26/2010

Thanks Red. I was just finally inspired again. :) You leave the best comments.

redbloodink

06/26/2010

awe I'm glad you were moved....... red

In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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