Breaking Down

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this isn't one of my best, but its something that I put together because I was listening to "Are You Happy Now? by Megan and Liz" Look it up, and listen to it

Breaking Down

You've finally done it,
You've broken me down,
You think that things will get better for you,
Because you are out hurting everyone,
But the truth is that it won't,
If you have been going through nothing but hell,
Then why would you wanna put someone else through it?
Why would you wanna hurt someone as much as you hurt?
Things are really hard and yet you may not see it,
You may not understand things that are happening,
But you shouldn't take it out on others,
Cause what if you break them down?
What if you are the one that causes them to feel worthless?
Or feel like a nobody?
Things aren't always easy for everybody,
But that doesn't mean to take it out on people,
Because you had a bad day...

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In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

sbbuchanan’s Poems (52)

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Breathe 1
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Always Be Remembered... 0
Breaking Down 0
Missing... 1
Make It Through 0
Turned It Back Around 0
Invisible 0
Scared 1
Nothing Left 0
I Never Existed 1
Nothing Left To Say 2
I Really Need You 0
Pain Just Go Away 0
Shouldn't Have To Boo 0
My Dog Rover 2
The Best 2
On Your Side 2
Good For A Change 0
What Could Have Been 0
Fallen Down 0
Lost Everything 2
Never Forget 0
My Broken Heart 0
Love You More 2
Let You Go 0
Be There For You 0
About You 3
Place In My Heart 0
Love You 2
Always Have Me 0
Hurt Me Even More 0
Give Up My Life For You 0
Give Up 0
No More Happiness 0
Be Enough? 0
Deal With It 0
Last Forever 0
Hold On 0
Have Me 0
Wouldn't Ask 0
Till Forever 0
Tearing Her Apart 0
Think Of 0
You Are My Heart 0
Gone Away 0
Forever 0
Forever and Always 0
In My Memory 0
Love Is Forever In My Heart 2
Out Of Any Of The Rest 2