Breathe

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    Poem Commentary

    I wrote this on May 30th, 2012. Honestly, my thoughts on this, is towards an ex. I wrote this so I could relieve some of the thoughts I had of him, and it helped.

    Breathe

    You cut my heart with the lie you told,
    You made it so hard to breathe,
    You don't see what your doing to me,
    Your making it so hard for me,
    How could you do this to me?
    Why would you lie to me?
    You said I made you happy,
    Well if I did,
    Then how come you hurt me?
    Why'd you let her come between us?
    Why'd you break my heart in two?
    Like you said you'd never do,
    I'm sick of the games and the lies,
    My heart fell for you,
    And you broke it,
    Though it wasn't yours to break,
    You act like you care,
    I can see it in your eyes that you don't,
    So why'd you lie to me.
    It's okay though,
    Cause I know where we stand,
    And honestly,
    I know I can do so much better,
    So you no longer have to,
    Make it so hard for me to breathe. 

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    Wakeitha commented on Breathe

    06-23-2012

    My friend, we as women got to learn stop giving our all at the first beginning of a relationship. I been in your shoe not long ago and i know how u feel. May God bless you and that man that finds you will treat your heart like gold. some men don't no how precious women r, we are jewels, so his lost and your gain.

    sbbuchanan

    07/20/2012

    thanks hun, i am doing better since i wrote this :) but that means alot

    Poetry is when an emotion has found its thought and the thought has found words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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    Always Be Remembered... 0
    Breaking Down 0
    Missing... 1
    Make It Through 0
    Turned It Back Around 0
    Invisible 0
    Scared 1
    Nothing Left 0
    I Never Existed 1
    Nothing Left To Say 2
    I Really Need You 0
    Pain Just Go Away 0
    Shouldn't Have To Boo 0
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    The Best 2
    On Your Side 2
    Good For A Change 0
    What Could Have Been 0
    Fallen Down 0
    Lost Everything 2
    Never Forget 0
    My Broken Heart 0
    Love You More 2
    Let You Go 0
    Be There For You 0
    About You 3
    Place In My Heart 0
    Love You 2
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    Hurt Me Even More 0
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    In My Memory 0
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