broken

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    broken

    my world so dark. i feel broken nright now, my pride wounded as an animal in the wild. my heart not so free now, feeling like im in a cage, not able to run, not able to escape, not able to do what's on one's mind. among many personalities, all are different but all can be the same. 100 people, 1 mission, to have nad not be or to be and not have....
    broken....
    the bus trip from nowhere to an even more nowhere, everything uncertain. nothing not yet known, wish i had a clue but my heart not having a thought. got one in my life that i know, the rest fair-weather. not able to distinguish but soon thoughts coming together like links in a chain, not yet connected....
    broken....
    my feeling on paper, what do this really mean. yet i don't know, solution not yet found but maybe sooner or later i won't feel like i feel. this world of mine not so shiny, my glass slammed against the concrete. we all know the outcome....
    broken....
    Edward Orlando Griffin

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    1990lh commented on broken

    08-06-2009

    wow great poem full of emtion and confusion very powerful well written.

    When power leads man towards arrogance, poetry reminds him of his limitations. When power narrows the area of man's concern, poetry reminds him of the richness and diversity of existence. When power corrupts, poetry cleanses.

    John F. Kennedy (1917-1963) Thirty-fifth President of the USA

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