drift away

1 Comments

Tags:
  • Confusion

    drift away

     i don't know what i'm writing and i don't know why i'm writing it....i have a feeling that i need to share but do i really wanna share it....i have been sad now for minutes longer than most and i wanna write but something is stopping me....i do not know what it could be becuz i have poetry in my heart, my soul made my poetic self....now my poetic self is in conflict, battling something with-in....i hope that fellow poets don't fall victim to things that i have been enduring and not willing to return to....mine friends are now mine enemies and mine enemies are now non-existent so which can you tell me is the worst....i need answers and i need your prayer....my heart hurts as if its been broken but fact is that it's still in pieces from many times before....never healed but just pieced back together held on but the glue has weakened....don't let my soul wander, don't let my heart beat for no reason, don't let me just - - - - drift away........
                                                         - Edward Orlando Griffin

    Poem Comments

    (1)

    Please login or register

    You must be logged in or register a new account in order to
    leave comments/feedback and rate this poem.

    Login or Register

    BlacknWhite commented on drift away

    06-10-2009

    This makes me what to keep you close and be your friend. I feel you, I know what I feel is similar. I feel sometimes I could just drift away and never be reached again. Its like a restless tired. You have company. Dont ever feel alone.
    Reply to Comment

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

    edgee’s Poems (35)

    Title Comments Submitted
    Title Comments Submitted
    me being write or wrong 0 09/14/2016
    untitled love 0 05/13/2013
    random thought 0 05/13/2013
    Save Me 0 05/13/2013
    random thought 0 11/10/2012
    Save Me 1 04/13/2012
    this woman again 1 07/20/2010
    this time i cry 3 10/10/2009
    3 o'clock low 1 10/03/2009
    we as a people 1 09/24/2009
    still wondering 2 09/14/2009
    Don't Bother 3 09/01/2009
    playing the puppet 3 06/22/2009
    strange ways 4 06/12/2009
    drift away 1 05/22/2009
    broken 1 03/31/2009
    did we try 7 02/07/2009
    for you, i will 5 01/14/2009
    Letters To My Poets 2 01/14/2009
    "Fear" 1 12/29/2008
    love is again 3 12/26/2008
    love is 6 12/26/2008
    Black Man, I Am Thee 2 12/24/2008
    my manhood, my curse 3 12/23/2008
    This Woman, Beautiful Woman 8 12/23/2008
    Nobody Know.... -17 12/23/2008
    Guess Who's Back... 1 12/23/2008
    a phone conversation 2 12/23/2008
    just my feelings 1 12/23/2008
    Something Not To See 1 12/23/2008
    Strength 2 12/23/2008
    Don't Know 1 12/20/2008
    My Temple 0 12/20/2008
    The Ghost of Me 5 12/20/2008
    My Present, My Past, Not My Future 2 12/20/2008
    Top of Page