BROWN SUGAR

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    BROWN SUGAR

    A passionate kiss

    Melting ice cream on the lips

    Sweet aroma from the abyss

    Giving motion to the hips

     

    A momentary pause

    A curious peek

    At the ultimate cause

    Of the sensuous mystique

     

    Eyes again closing

    As if he were dozing

    Rapturous moment all encompassing

    Into the bliss he now is giving

     

    So lifelike it seems

    This pleasurable feeling

    But it’s all in the dreams

    Of the Brown Sugar he’s missing

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    mamasan commented on BROWN SUGAR

    11-07-2009

    Your handsome face with those beautiful knowing eyes scrunched up behind your lenses which then breaks out in to a sweet smile. It's obvious your rhapsody is on its way to the shelves of E-bay and Barnes & Noble. And, I am sure you will allow me to say that you are noble by far compared to Barnes & Noble. I surely love the way you ply those adjectives, in a generous way. Very much like your own psyche you put on display. Have a good Saturday with a whole lot of fun....
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    A poem begins as a lump in the throat, a sense of wrong, a homesickness, a lovesickness. It finds the thought and the thought finds the words.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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