SWEETNESS

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    SWEETNESS

    Warm, caring, effervescent eyes

    Full, pretty, luscious Tu-lips

    Contagious smiles that hypnotize

    Exercise caution when encountering hips

     

    Unpretentious, vivacious

    Better enjoyed when having a la carte

    Sexy, most gracious

    Best item on the calorie chart

     

    Tender, loving, all aglow

    Chest of sparkling, seductive gold

    Ripe, sweet, juicy mango

    Visions of passion uncontrolled

     

    A pleasure to behold

    Most definitely his weakness

    Even better to hold

    Among other things he calls her Sweetness

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    mamasan commented on SWEETNESS

    11-08-2009

    Sweetness indeed and a pleasure to read this sonnet to someone that is obviously adored. Another song and my pleasure to listen to....
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    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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