TWILIGHT

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    • consciousmsgr
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    TWILIGHT

     

     

    Crystal clear blue

    Gradually fades to gray.

    Bidding adieu,

    Waves cease to break and spray.

     

    Precocious pigeons retire to shadowy eaves;

    No safer place is there to stay.

    Once rhythmically fluttering leaves

    Can only gently sway.

     

    On land and darkening sea

    Daylight slowly surrenders to decay.

    Reminiscent of a Christmas tree,

    Twinkling lights now punctuate the bay,

     

     As orange hues

    Grow dim and melt away,

    And nightingales soulfully sing the blues

    To mourn the passing day.

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    Poemeater commented on TWILIGHT

    09-04-2010

    Great poetry my friend. I'm enjoying it. Continue on this path of greatness.

    mamasan commented on TWILIGHT

    11-08-2009

    Gosh the words are so rhythmic that I may have even seen the sugar plums on that Christmas tree; perhaps the twinkling lights may have mesmerized my senses. However, can't take the credit away from you my friend.....you are a wordsmith and your song is literally magic.

    Poetry is not a turning loose of emotion, but an escape from emotion.

    T. S. Eliot (1888-1965) American-English poet and playwright.

    consciousmsgr’s Poems (14)

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    TWILIGHT 2
    RAINFOREST 4
    INSIGHT 4
    WISDOM 5
    OVERNIGHT SUCCESS 0
    COSMIC FLIGHT 2
    WALLS 1
    PUPPET MASTER 1
    ILLUSION 1
    STILLNESS 0
    SWEETNESS 1
    BROWN SUGAR 1
    QUIET STORM 2
    REFLECTIONS 2