Can you see it?

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    Can you see it?

    Can you see it?
    Can you feel it?
    The pain and the suffering
    Can you hear it?
    Can you feel it?
    The agony and the screaming
    We all exclaimed at the top of our lungs,
    Stay down!
    Stay down!
    Its not worth it
    But no, He kept getting back up
    With every piece of glass that pierced His skin
    With every crack of that whip
    With tears dripping down His cheeks
    He yelled out in pain
    But never quit.
    Teary-eyed we yelled
    Please just stay down
    But no, He kept getting back up
    Can you see it?
    Can you feel it?
    The love and determination
    Though we forsaked
    Though we denied
    Though we sinned
    He still took every whip,
    Every insult, every tongue lashing,
    Every spit in the face,
    Every accusation
    On one knee with blood dripping
    In agonizing pain, He lifted His heavy head
    And looked into the eyes of every person
    There who was doing the unimaginable to Him
    And whispered the three most powerful words
    A person can ever say:
    I LOVE YOU!

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    origionalmerlin commented on Can you see it?

    04-24-2009

    good theme, logically building intent, and ending in a statement.. a good write and a good read..lok up my bio and check it out love is always win win...(grin)

    Poetry is finer and more philosophical than history; for poetry expresses the universal, and history only the particular.

    Aristotle (384 BC-322 BC) Greek philosopher.

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