What if I told you...

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    What if I told you...

    That you have the most beautiful eyes
    That you have a wonderful smile
    That for them men would have died
    That it shines from beyond a mile

    That I wanted to be yours
    That I wanted to get on one knee
    That you’re the one I adore
    To please hear my one plea

    That I’m proud to be your man
    That I want to give you this ring
    That with you I want to stand
    And give you all these things

    That all these what ifs are true
    That I truly love you!

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    poetheart87 commented on What if I told you...

    11-18-2009

    What if you told me...I would be the most happiest woman in the world ;) The feeling just rains through this and I hope that this lucky lady said yes. Or if it's for someone special, but not yet said, I wish you luck on your journey

    ThePoeticDoctor

    11/24/2009

    actually I am single and wish I had someone to express this sentiment.

    caspiancri commented on What if I told you...

    03-16-2009

    nice emotion

    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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