Dance with the Moon

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    Dance with the Moon

    Dance with the Moon

    They dance the dance of seduction, never touching only teasing.

    She steps back from his advances shying away from his persistance.

    Never ones to give up they have danced thier dance of seduction since the begining of time.

    Strong and powerful, life giving and warm he glows radiantly, proudly.

    Demure and deliberate her soft glow entices, entices even the seas to turn frienzied.

    The mating ritual between these two celestial bodies can never be consumated, So they forever dance their dance of seduction.

    The dance between the Sun and the Moon, The light and the dark

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    Panaramicpoet commented on Dance with the Moon

    04-11-2010

    very nice passionate imagry keep on writing . ..all is well
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    passionflower commented on Dance with the Moon

    04-09-2010

    great concept. I really like it. flows very smooth. i give a 10
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    koolmom0 commented on Dance with the Moon

    04-06-2010

    Very nice honey, you speak of love through out this piece. :) Kool
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    BikemanRJ commented on Dance with the Moon

    04-01-2010

    Good word and thought flow with this poem. And the line "entices even the seas to be frienzed" really jumped out at me as well as......"these two celestial bodies can never be consumated.' A very interesting read. God Bless BikemanRJ
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    Poetry is either something that lives like fire inside you or else it is nothing, an empty formalized bore around which pedants can endlessly drone their notes and explanations.

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