Razor Blade

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Razor Blade

In despair she holds a cold metal blade tightly to her wrist, Each beat of her broken heart thrusts her veins against the razor sharp blade begging for sweet release.

With tear filled eyes he takes her hand and places it blade and all to his chest, staring into each other's eyes they speak volumes to one another without muttering an audible word.

She understands and drops the blade, As she closes her eyes her tears fall with great force, only closed for a second and he is gone.

Her memory of him and his love for her haunts and protects her, protects her from herself.

He wishes for her not to take herself from the world but to use her pain to heal it.

Looking upon the ground she takes the blade and puts it back on her necklace,....... Just in case.....

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commonreactor commented on Razor Blade

04-12-2010

really enjoyed this ... thanks for sharing. well done!

Mandi commented on Razor Blade

04-12-2010

and where is the rest of the story? is it to be continued?

Panaramicpoet commented on Razor Blade

04-11-2010

Wow . .very powerful . .and vivid imagry. Good job and sad too. .hope this person is ok now.

passionflower commented on Razor Blade

04-09-2010

beautifully written. Love hurts like hell. great .a 10 on this one.

mustascheman commented on Razor Blade

04-07-2010

A chilling tale of lost love and wanting to loose ones own life. A tale as old as time yet still timeless if not only for the words used to express the feeling. Good job!

Poetry is what gets lost in translation.

Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

samberr’s Poems (33)

Title Comments
Title Comments
Razor Blade 5
Greetings 1
Amanda's 0
Obsticles 0
Masters 0
Pain 0
Mistaken 1
I saw her tonight 0
Take a walk 1
Love 0
Broken 1
Death 0
Her 0
Never look back 1
Love is a rose 0
I am that guy 1
Do you know who I am ? 0
Waiting 0
Where have you gone? 1
Alone, Empty 0
Hands 0
Handprint 1
Where life begins...agai
n
1
True Love 2
The reason for the rain 1
Stone Garden 1
Resurrection 0
Mi Amor Especial. 1
Ancient Language 1
Dating 1
Untitled 0
Ascent from Perdition 1
Dance with the Moon 5