Darkest Waters

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  • Fantasy

    Darkest Waters

     Over everyone I know

    Over all the times I show

    Darkest Waters of my life

    Stills that frame my fillterd mind

    It's like extasy you know

    You take the mind I never had

    You take the times I'm never Glad

    You know to well the things I've done

    You shame that all I know is wrong

    A broken heart an empty sea

    Every love is extasy

    Every time I ever bleed

    Everyone I ever see

    Rushes water from my eyes

    Empty shells from my cries

    It's all fantasy you know

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    danmartyjake1 commented on Darkest Waters

    01-02-2010

    Captured a dark place in the soul with this tender write and outpouring and it clings at the end to a fantasy escape. Great Write!
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    christliked commented on Darkest Waters

    10-24-2009

    mystical, magical way you tour your mind what an imagination
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