Dawn's Coming!

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    Well ... Now that we're awake :) . . .

    Dawn's Coming!

    I woke up this morning -
    With you by my side.
    The heat of your body,
    Pressing up against mine.
    My passion arose -
    Over-boiling inside.
    Overwhelming need,
    To be satisfied!
    ~xxx~
    Love in the Morning - Love in the Night!
    Dawn's Coming!
    Love in the Dark - Love in the Light!
    Dawn's Coming!
    Love in the Raw - Love in the Sack!
    Love under the Gun - Love under Attack!!
    Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh! Baby! - Keep your motor running!!
    Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh! Dawn's Coming!!
    ~xxx~
    I woke up this morning -
    My arms around you.
    Knew what you wanted,
    Hell Ya! I wanted it too!
    I held you closer -
    As the tension grew.
    Hands began to wander -
    Hips began to groove!
    ~xxx~
    Love in the Morning - Love in the Night!
    Dawn's Coming!
    Love in the Dark - Love in the Light!
    Dawn's Coming!
    Love in the Raw - Love in the Sack!
    Love under the Gun - Love under Attack!!
    Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh! Baby! - Keep your motor running!!
    Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh! Dawn's Coming!!
    ~xxx~
    I woke up this morning -
    A smile on my face.
    Clothes and sheets,
    Thrown all over the place.
    Said "We better get going -
    We're running late.
    So come on Baby,
    There's no time to waste!"
    ~xxx~
    'Cause - Dawn's Coming!
    Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh! Baby! - Keep your motor running!!
    Oh! Hold on Baby - Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh! Dawn's Coming!!
    ~xxx~
    Love in the Morning - Dawn's Coming!!
    Love in the Night - Dawn's Coming!!
    Love in the Raw - Dawn's Coming!!
    Love at first Bite - Dawn's Coming!!
    Oh Baby! - Dawn's Coming!!
    ~xxx~

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Dawn's Coming!

    08-16-2010

    would love to hear this with music..........love the lyric. truned me on a little......ok a lot
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    knight4696

    08/16/2010

    lol! :) Thanks JJ - There is no better way to wake up that I know of! :) Thanks again! Ken

    Teardrops commented on Dawn's Coming!

    03-12-2010

    Kne i see I have over looked a true poet , songwritter and teller of stories in you . I wont make that mistake again i will read each and every thing you write its wonderful and clever and creative thanks Maire
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    knight4696

    03/12/2010

    Thank you MArie - your comments are so humbling. This is my favorite erotic song. Thanks again for oyur wonderful comments! :) Ken

    am2anangel commented on Dawn's Coming!

    02-06-2010

    sounds fun. again a tune in my head. great job.as always enjoy your work.
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    knight4696

    02/06/2010

    Thanks angel ;) It definately is fun! Nothing like a little lovin to start the day! :) Thanks again! Ken

    danmartyjake1 commented on Dawn's Coming!

    12-28-2009

    Great Song! I hear the melody as I read it. Beautiful sounds as it is read aloud. 10!
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    knight4696

    12/28/2009

    Thx Marion! I appreciate it - it's one of my personal faves and I'm happy you enjoyed it. Thanks again! ...Ken

    Grito commented on Dawn's Coming!

    12-28-2009

    How wonderful and airy life and love can be, EXCELLENT IN Dawn!!!
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    knight4696

    12/28/2009

    Thanks!!! This is my personal faves of my erotic writes. I'm glad to see you enjoyed it! :) Thanks again! Ken

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