Take My Hand If You Dare

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    An Invitation ... Do you dare?

    Take My Hand If You Dare

    ~Come~
    Take my hand if you dare …
    Come follow me.
    Let me show you my world of fantasy.
    Where my dreams mingle with reality.
    And my nightmares gel with Insanity.
    ~Come~
    Take my hand if you dare …
    Come and escape.
    There’s nothing to fear, My Castle awaits.
    This Knight and his demons - journey to hell,
    But, rest assured my friend, You will be well.
    ~Come~
    Come follow me.
    Take my hand if you dare …
    ~Come~


    KjK061610

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    JadedJezzabel commented on Take My Hand If You Dare

    08-11-2010

    WE LOVE THIS. THE DARK SYMBOLISM CAPTURED THE PAIN WITHIN SO WELL.
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    knight4696

    08/12/2010

    Thanks again JJ! :) This is just an invitation to delve into my dark writes that will be included in my 2nd book "Beyond The Door" Happy you enjoyed! :) Ken

    MootPoint commented on Take My Hand If You Dare

    08-06-2010

    I like this. I love to mingle in insanity. hehe I wouldn't have guaranteed anyone would be well. I would have said something like Take a trip out of your shell. But that's me. :)
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    knight4696

    08/08/2010

    Thanks Moot! :) This is a segue poem to my dark writes in my book "Beyond The Door" I guaranteed it because I didn't want to scare off the meek. :) lol! Thanks again Pal! :) Ken

    angel33614 commented on Take My Hand If You Dare

    07-05-2010

    Enchanting in a very mysterous way, like a calling of an unknown entity, yet there lies the curiousity of the cat. Another great write my friend, a journey into your world is almost as intense as the rabbit hole is in mal's, lol. I think I like her world a little better though, her rabbit hole has a big screen TV, pool, jacuzi, longue chairs, it is comfortable down there, lol. All kidding aside, this intro is ideed very inviting, it calls to the very heart of one's soul and the curiousty of one's nature, as i live with no fear i dare to dwell deeper into the castle's keep, ohh by the way where is the outhouse around here, I really have to take a piss, lol. So the old saying goes that curiousity killed the cat, so that does mean I am the main course for dinner??? lol fantastic write my friend, sorry for the quirky humor, i am just in one of those moods, lol. Purity of the soul, journey well!!! Angel aka poem buster
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    knight4696

    07/13/2010

    Lol! :) Thanks again Angel! .. This is just an intro poem to my Dark Poems that will be included in my 2nd book " Beyond The Door" I tried to make it Inviting so to speak. Tempting the reader's curiosity to venture further ... Thanks again for taking the dare! :) Ken

    MarionYost commented on Take My Hand If You Dare

    06-21-2010

    AWESOME-NESS As always! God! I miss reading your poems. Still have 14 pages of comments/ratings to return the favors on LOL. great poem I'll read more a.s.a.p.... All the best -Marion-
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    knight4696

    06/23/2010

    Thanks so much Hun! I appreciate your sentiments as always - and it's fun to win - but u can get carpnel tunnel just replying! :) But, so goes the life of an OP weekly contest winner. Welcome to the Winners Circle my friend. Thanks again! :) Ken

    ginga commented on Take My Hand If You Dare

    06-20-2010

    knight, Really, no I don"t dare. Keep me safe and alive...although the mystery of what is behind the dare is quite alluring! ginga
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    knight4696

    06/20/2010

    Oh c'mon now Ginga .. don't play coy .. You know you secretly love my darkside :) This is just an invitation to a party. C'mon take my hand! lol! :) Thanks again for the wonderful comments and reads! :) Ken

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