Delicate one

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    • harmony74
    • is wondering if i will ever do another poem.hmmm,

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    Thought I would try to make a short poem of one of many things I enjoy that God created. I absolutely love butterflies.

    Delicate one

     Oh beautiful butterfly..
    Your so fragile but flowing with beauty and grace..
    such beautiful colors with wings looking like they are trimmed with lace

    Thank you Lord for such beautiful wonder..
    For the things also like rock, hills, and loud thunder..
    most of all I enjoy thee,
    Beautiful butterfly, God, send them over to me : )




    HAHAh..okok, am trying..kind of corny, but gave it a whirl..

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    TREVON commented on Delicate one

    12-13-2011

    Yes butterflies are beautiful just like your words, good write.
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    earthly commented on Delicate one

    04-05-2010

    I agree-This is sweet-butterflies are special delicate creatures-nice write-Namaste...Earthly
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    harmony74 commented on Delicate one

    04-05-2010

    too nice of you both..I appreciate the encouragement.
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    Skite commented on Delicate one

    04-05-2010

    Please continue trying, your poem amazes me...:) luv it!!
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    dahlusion commented on Delicate one

    04-05-2010

    There's nothing corny about this delicate and most beautiful write. Bravo!!
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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