God's Romance

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    • harmony74
    • is wondering if i will ever do another poem.hmmm,

    God's Romance

     How you have been pursuing me from first breath
    in order to win my heart,
    Your love and romance isn't choclate candies or a candlelite dinner,
    yours comes with painted sunsets.
    laying in bed at night you send cricket symphonies, a warm wind that whispers in my ear.
    the beauty of simply a swaying tree, lush gardens that bloom deep green.
    your devotion is fierce!
    You know what it takes to capture me and take my breath away oh Lord.
    You know how to grip my heart even when my morning starts,
    birds sing a song of love.
    I adore, you captivated my heart!

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    Wakeitha commented on God's Romance

    09-30-2010

    Beautiful my sister because it is the truth. Our Lord and savior knows what capture our heart. Know one can sweet us off our feet like him.
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    kdarcy commented on God's Romance

    08-01-2010

    A nice write full of the truth all should see more easily, well done, be well
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    lorenzo commented on God's Romance

    08-01-2010

    this is beautiful......beautiful and so sweet...........
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    BadBadBear commented on God's Romance

    07-25-2010

    You've written one of the most beautiful romance poems i've read! Great! BBBear
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    harmony74

    07/26/2010

    *bites nails* and blushing..thanks.

    In science one tries to tell people, in such a way as to be understood by everyone, something that no one ever knew before. But in poetry, it's the exact opposite.

    Franz Kafka (1883-1924) Czech writer.

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