Let down..

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  • Emotional
    • harmony74
    • is wondering if i will ever do another poem.hmmm,

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    Not really writting rhyming ..deep poems. Getting out thoughts and umm perhaps trying to put together a "so called" poem of some sort : )

    Let down..

     thinking irrational
    thoughts going astray
    tomorrow is a new day
    God remind me I only need your affirmation in life
    forgive me for being sad about being overlooked
    When in the end our treasures are stored in Heaven,
    My heart is so sensitive as I sometimes sip on falling tears
    Oh, Father b you provide an endless ocean that will never leave me to thirst again
    If only I put full trust in you, Oh the pure joy my heart would feel

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    Qualin commented on Let down..

    02-03-2011

    My burdens are heavy,without the Lord where would we be there are so many today that need to read this and learn...very good write my friend...Qualin
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    If I feel physically as if the top of my head were taken off, I know that is poetry.

    Emily Dickinson (1830-1886) American poet.

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