Pitter Patter

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    • harmony74
    • is wondering if i will ever do another poem.hmmm,

    Pitter Patter

     You make me smile from cheek to cheek,
    You filll me with joy and complete warmth.
    Is my face turning red or Am I biting my lip?

    Tell me your words of wisdom what you know.
    Let me know where your mind takes you.
    You make me laugh, left with a huge grin.
    .....

    Ok I stopped..Will carry on at some point. excuse my absent mindedness, for I am new at this thing called POETRY.

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    icu2 commented on Pitter Patter

    01-10-2010

    I'm afraid the pitter-patter was my big feet...and I opologize. Nice poem my friend. Keep up the good work!
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    charles52 commented on Pitter Patter

    01-10-2010

    Harmony74: A delightful, fun read. Thank you. Charless
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    dahlusion commented on Pitter Patter

    11-16-2009

    This is really sweet poetic dessert dished-out with a topping of silliness and honey—lovely!!
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    RymaHouri commented on Pitter Patter

    06-07-2009

    simple but very beautiful... thank you also for your comments on my poem, you got a talent too, a light hearted one... especially at the end... what they dont know is that you are welcoming them into your amazing poetry world. have a nice day.
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    Carmelina commented on Pitter Patter

    06-01-2009

    why did you stop it was a good start. something simple. something people could understand and figure out and why oh why did you stop . task: put something up without thinking twice about deleting it.
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    To have great poets there must be great audiences too.

    Walt Whitman, American Poet (1819-1892)

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