Thank U Pal

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    • harmony74
    • is wondering if i will ever do another poem.hmmm,

    Thank U Pal

     I appreciate the way u backed me up
    you clean my verbal mess
    That a lone shows some sort of care,
    to which i thought u were bare of this..

    cheek to ears i grin
    for it is something within
    u stir up this happiness..
    darn u,, can I please smack u?






    PS to anyone who reads..I am fully aware i am no poet..this is strictly practice..

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    dumdumdj commented on Thank U Pal

    04-26-2010

    dont be so hard on yourself....this sounds really good....poetry doesnt have to rhyme or even make sense to anyone else......keep writing
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    harmony74

    04/26/2010

    Your waaaaay to kind : ) lol but thank u : )

    lorenzo commented on Thank U Pal

    04-04-2010

    U...R....2....a poet....a....B.....U.....T.....ful poet.
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    ginga commented on Thank U Pal

    04-01-2010

    Harmony, certainly a catchy rhymer which makes the reader smile! I agree with dah, dear poet. ginga
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    dahlusion commented on Thank U Pal

    03-23-2010

    You can practice anytime, this is playful, and you are a poet. Peace and Light, Dah
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    harmony74

    03/24/2010

    Your too kind.. : )

    Poetry is what is lost in translation.

    Robert Frost (1875-1963) American Poet.

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